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Re: Our Lady Liberty
Hey, look, it's me again. You know the drill, if you have any questions or need me explain some illegible comment, please tell me. Ta, Cal. WE'RE GOOD LIKE THAT ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Fighting the Blue
Oh my fluffy lord! I finally scanned stuff. :P If you have any questions or need me explain some illegible comment, please tell me. NO, I DON'T WANT FRIES WITH ...
Apr 6, 2009 -
Re: Historical Fiction
I haven't read Regina Scott before, but in the YA Historical Romance bin, I've always liked Ann Rinaldi alot. She is not pure romance, but some of her books have ...
Nov 8, 2008 -
Re: Vetren'iy, 1.1 - Rare Word, Refuge
Oy, I would much prefer writing Vetren'iy to source analyses and Italian translations. ^_^; Well, that's a given. And, more Vetren'iy would be awesome. *sends out good writerly thoughts* Oh, ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: A Lively Conversation Between Two Corpses (3.1-4)
Sam, OH, MILES Miles has inner change. That in itself is fantastic. In my Creative Writing class, we discussed what makes a good short story, and one of the things ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: A Lively Conversation Between Two Corpses (3.0)
Sam, You know the drill. :P WHAT I MEAN BY CONFUSING Margot is enumerating on the reasons she is not worried about what happens to Miles, and then bam, there ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: A Lively Conversation Between Two Corpses (2)
Sam, This was in my 'To Critique' box for way too long, me thinks. DESTINATION ANYWHERE One of the things I adore about this story is that all the characters ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Fortuitous Graves
This has been in the 'To Critique' box for way too long, but finally I have it finished. THE FLOW There are a few line which I have pointed out ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Four-Leafed Clovers
This has been in my 'To Critique' box for awhile, sorry it took me so long to get around to it. First, I love your poetry, and I think what ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: The Ballad of the Trees
This had been in my 'To Critique' box for awhile. Sorry it took me so long to post this. WHAT I MEAN BY DISSERVICE In S1 & S4, the rhyme ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Vetren'iy, 1.1 - Rare Word, Refuge
Hey, you. :D THE ART OF BLOCKING In this, I don't quite know where anything is psychically, especially where the lane is relative to where the church and the man ...
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Farewell --EDITED
Hey, hon. I almost think you could drag this story out and plump it up, but otherwise it was a nice read. :P Ta, Cal.
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: Penelope
Hey, look what I found, a Penelope review. :P DONE GOOD I loved the relationship of teacher and student that you portrayed here. :P Ta, Cal.
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: May
'Lo there, Gadi. :D Ta, Cal.
Aug 19, 2008 -
Re: dawn with fox.
'Lo there. Look what I found, a review. :P If you have any questions or have trouble reading my handwriting please tell me so. GENDER ASSIGNMENT You refer to the ...
Aug 19, 2008
